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Sunday, April 18, 2010

Ah,so dizzy..

Now,I feel a little dizzy,I wonder why...I think i need a sleep soon enough...

composition

You were hiking with your friends near a lake when you saw a chest floating on it.

- What did you do?
- What did you find inside the chest?
- What happened next?
- What happened in the end?

My composition:

''Oh!I am so tired!''I exclaimed.
''You are not the only one who is tired.''Christine gasped.
''Can we rest for a while?''Mike asked with exhaustion.We sat on a big rock that was near a lake. We took out our water and food and consumed it.I was eating my sandwich when I saw a chest floating on the lake.
''There is a chest floating on the lake!''I exclaimed with my mouth full.Christine and Mike looked at the lake and spotted it out.Mike jumped into the lake and took the chest.Lucky for him, the lake was not that deep.He came back to shore and opened the chest.There are a lot of variety of diamonds!
''We are rich!We are rich!''Mike shouted like he was crazy.We jumped up and down, feeling very happy.
''Each one of us will get one third of the diamonds.''Christine said.
''But,I was the one who discover this chest.''I complained as I was greedy.
''I was the one who get the chest.''Mike said, feeling unhappy.
I pulled the left side of the chest,Mike pulled the right side of the chest.Christine tried to persuade us to stop but we turned a deaf ear.In the end,the chest flew off into the lake.
''It's all your fault!''I blamed Mike.Mike replied the same words.We went to the lake and realized that the diamonds are only stones with glitter.We were very disappointed.
''I sorry that I shouted at you all because of my greediness.''I apologized to Mike.
''I was in the wrong too.''Mike replied.
''So,are we still friends?''I asked.
''Definitely!''Mike replied with happiness.We hugged each other,Christine smiled.After that,we went home in our separate ways.
This is the most unforgettable experience to I had.

composition

You were listening attentively in class when you felt something poking you. Turning around, you saw a classmate staring at you.

- What did you do?
- What happened next?
- What happened in the end?

My composition:

''Remember,only green plants photosynthesis to make food.Photosynthesis require water,air, sunlight.''Mr Lim said.I was listening attentively and writing notes when suddenly, I felt that someone is poking me.I turned around and saw my classmate,Mike, staring at me.
''Why are you staring at me, Mike?Why did you poke me?''I asked Mike impolitely as I wanted to listen to Mr Lim's lesson.
''Oh,I was bored..''Mike replied immediately.
I thought in my mind,''What?Bored!Don't disturb me!''I was fuming with anger but I had to manage my impulsivity.
''If you are bored, then please do not disturb me!I want to listen to Mr Lim's lesson and want to get 91 and above for examination.''I replied with my voice getting louder and louder.''So,please do not disturb me now!''
''Aaron!Although I do not know what are you talking about,but I can hear your voice!Meet me at the general office after school!''Mr Lim heard the conversation and shouted at me.I turned around to see Mike and he was doing a funny face at me.At that time,I knew that I had fell into his trap.
''Ring....''School was over,I went over to the general office.
''Aaron,I knew you as an attentive, polite, helpful and respectful student.But now,you actually talked so loudly in my class just now!Please give a valid reason.''Mr Lim asked me in a gentle voice.
''I was attentively listening to you,writing notes.But suddenly,I felt someone poking me,so i looked back,Mike was staring at me.I asked him why did he poke me and stare at me,he said that it was for fun, he was bored.I was so angry,but I know I had to manage my impulsivity. I tried to talk to him politely but I just cannot take it anymore.So,Mr Lim,I am so sorry that i disrupted your lesson but I really did not do it on purpose.''I told everything that happened to Mr Lim.
''I see...Do you have plans to revenge on him?If you don't have, I have one idea.''Mr Lim said with a evil grin on his face.Something bad might happen.
The next day,Mr Lim said,''Mike, I knew as a good student, so I hope that you could serve me tea everyday,okay?I am so sorry to say that you cannot disagree.''
I thought in my mind,''So this is the plan?Okay,it seems interesting.''
Everyday,I took a peek at Mr Lim's office and saw Mr Lim doing his evil plans.
I heard his voice saying,''this tea is too hot, please make another cup of tea for me,this tea is too cold,please make another cup of tea for me.''He repeated it for ten times!
I really appreciate your help,Mr Lim!

composition(please give me marks)

Question:

You were walking past your neighbour's house when you heard a loud crash.

- What did you do?
- What did you see?
- What happened next?
- What happened in the end?

My composition:

''I like the movie that we just watched!''I exclaimed.
''Me too!'' Christine replied.After that,I looked at my watch and realized that it is already 11.30p.m.!
''Christine, I need to go now.My mother said that if i do not go back home by 12 midnight, she will not open the door for me.''I told Christine as fast as i can speak.
''Why?''Christine asked with curiosity.
''I explain to you next time.''
''Okay..''I said while preparing my heels.I ran for about 15 minutes and was too tired to continue running, so I started walking.I walked passed neighbor's house,almost reaching my house when I suddenly heard a sound.''Screech...Crash....''Out of curiosity, I ran towards the place where the sound come from and I found out that an accident has occur.I stood rooted to the ground as there was a big pool of blood on the road.After a while, I came back to my senses and searched for my mobile phone.I searched my whole bag but i could not find my mobile phone.I started panicking and my mind is a blank.Finally, I remembered that my house is just nearby!I ran as fast as possible towards my house and went to my house door.
''Mum!Open the door quickly!''I shouted impatiently.My mother came down and opened the door for me.I ran in at a brisk pace.I ran towards the phone and called the police department.I reported about what had happened just now.After that, I put down the phone.
My mother asked,'' What had happened?You didn't even take off your shoes when you came in!''I replied my mother with what I had saw.
''Well done,my darling! You have grown up to be a adult!I am proud of you!''My mother praised me with pride.I was so happy!
Soon,the police officers came, an ambulance also came.I went out and they wanted to give me an award.I went back with them and got an award.After that, they sent me home and received a call saying that the man is still alive.They told me and praised me another time,saying,''Well done!If you didn't call us, that man could have probably not survive at all!''
After this experience, it became something important in my mind.It is great for getting praises for doing something good!

Saturday, April 17, 2010

picture conversation

Picture: Grandpa's 80th Birthday

This picture depicts the scene of a house.It is probably someone's birthday as there is a banner saying: Happy 80th Birthday,Grandpa!There are lots of people.They are probably the relatives of the grandpa.

Scenario 1-normal

There are children lining up to give a present to an old man.That old man is probably their grandpa. Beside their grandpa, should be their grandma.They are lining up in an orderly manner, waiting for their turn or it is already their turn to give their gifts.From their grandpa's expression, i can infer that their grandpa is enjoying the receiving of gifts.

Personal Response

I can understand how he feels as i had received presents before.It feels great to receive gifts.

Scenario 2-wrong & consequence

There are two boys snatching over a big gift. One of them is big in size, the other is smaller in size.

Personal Response

I feel that what they are doing is wrong as if they accidentally hit someone that is near them, that person may have an injury. Their parents will have to pay hospital fees for that person. I suggest that they solve their problems somewhere else and not in a place where there is a limited amount of space.

Scenario 3-normal

A group of people are lining up to get food from the buffet table.There are lining up in an orderly manner.

Personal Response

I feel that what they do is right.If everyone is like this, then there will not be anymore fights just because of someone cutting the queue to get something.

Scenario 4-normal

There is someone is pouring juice into a bowl.I think that it should be that the bowl is empty and he help to fill the bowl.

Personal Response

I feel that what he do is right. From this act, i can infer that he is someone who is thoughtful for others and not selfish.

Conclusion

Receiving presents in birthdays is joyful.I had the experience before and i love the feeling of it.

Picture conversation

Picture: The monkey bar

This picture depicts a scene at the fitness corner of Yu Yang Primary School.There is a monkey bar at the fitness corner.The students are playing at the fitness corner.It is probably recess time.

Scenario 1-wrong & consequence

There are students playing soccer at the fitness corner.They are not following the rules at the fitness corner.The fitness corner is not for them to play soccer.

Personal Response

I feel that they have choose the wrong place to play soccer as one of them may accidentally kick the ball to hard and hit someone else.If they really hit someone else, there will be an accident that will occur.I suggest that they go to somewhere empty like the field to play soccer.

Scenario 2-cause & effect

There is a girl who fall of the monkey bars and injure herself.A student must have seen it and is going over to help her up.There is a boy on the monkey bars, he should be the one accompany her to the climb on the monkey bars.From his facial expression, i can tell that he must be worried.

Personal Response

I don't think that the girl should play at the monkey bars as she look young and short.She is not suitable for playing at the monkey bars.I suggest that she wait until she grow a little taller,then she can start trying to play on the monkey bars. So that there will be a lesser chance of injuring herself.

Conclusion

Accidents could occur anytime even when you are playing.Never think that you are safe all the time.

Picture conversation

Picture: The staircase

The picture depicts a scene of a boy who ran down the staircase and bump into a teacher who was holding a pile of books.It affected a few people.This probably is a school.

Scenario 1-cause & effect

The boy who ran down the staircase bumped into the teacher.Some books from the pile of books that the teacher is holding went down the stairs.Some helpful students who passed by,helped to pick up the books.The boy almost hit a man's coffee.He probably is the staff in the school.

Personal Response

I personally feel that the boy should not run down the stairs at all.Even if he is in a rush, he should see whether there are any possibility of bumping into anyone and cause an injury for himself or others.I suggest that he walk down the stairs quickly.

Conclusion

We should follow the safety rules at the staircase.By following it, accidents can be prevented.

another picture conversation

Picture: The swimming pool

This picture depicts the scene of a swimming meet organized by Orchid Primary School.It is held on the year 2005 as shown on the picture.On the scoreboard, which is on the top right hand side of the picture,shows that yellow house is leading in the match.

Scenario 1-normal

The children are cheering for their houses with all their might, hoping that their house will win in the match.They even made some banners to represent their houses.

Personal Response

I had this experience before and i think that cheering is useful for the competitors as when they hear these cheers, they will try not to disappoint their houses and make sure they did their best.
They will also be encouraged.

Scenario 2-wrong & consequence

At the announcer's table, there are some papers that are blown away.The announcer is oblivious of the papers that are blown away.

Personal Response

I feel that she could have tidied up the papers so that at least she will realize the papers even
when it is blown away.In this way, i can infer that she is not a tidy person.

Scenario 3-normal

The timers are timing the record of the swimmers.

Personal Response

I had experience of being timed before.You will have a type of stress and you have only a limit amount of time to do that particular thing.

Scenario 4- cause & effect

There is a boy from the green house that is drowning.He probably has a leg cramp.He may have not did his warm-ups before he start to swim.The timer, who time him, seem to notice that but the lifeguard that is at the side of the swimming pool didn't seem to notice as he is talking on his phone.The timer is fuming with anger of seeing this sight.

Personal Response

This lifeguard did not did his job on watching out for the student's who are in danger and save them. If he does not notice it soon, there will be loss of a precious life as everyone's life is precious.

Conclusion

Accidents could happen if you do not prepare well or do not listen to instruction in a match.We should all prevent that from happening.

My picture conversation

Picture: The hospital ward

This picture depicts a ward in a hospital.There is a patient, the family members of the patient and a nurse.

Scenario 1- normal

The nurse is making the pillow ,the one that the patient is sleeping on, comfortable for him.This is what a nurse is suppose to do.Looking at his injury, it must be painful.He may not be able to move around freely that easily.The patient seem old, having an injury at an old age is quite pitiful, i empathize with him.

Personal Response

Having an injury isn't good as injury is painful.But sometimes, injuries are good.So, the next time, you will be more alert and make sure you won't injure yourself again.

Scenario 2- wrong & consequence

There is a boy wearing a shirt with a strip and black shorts, chasing a girl with two pony tail, wearing a white shirt with black sleeves and a dotted skirt.They probably are siblings.

Personal Response

I don't think they should play in the hospital ward as there is a limited amount of space there.If they accidentally bump into something and injure themselves or injure someone else, it won't be good.If I am one of them, i will not play there, even if i am dying to play, i will go to somewhere where there is nobody like for example, the basketball court, an empty field.

Scenario 3-cause & effect

There is a lady who is fuming with anger.She probably is angry that the children are not displaying a good behavior.She may be their mother.

Personal Response

If i am her, i will be angry too.I will punish them when we are outside the hospital.I will make sure they remember to behave in places like the hospital by giving them a good detention.

Conclusion

We should have good behavior in places like the hospital.

Thursday, April 15, 2010

My oral speech

Introduction

The picture depicts a scene at a beautiful beach.There is a crowd of people of all ages in the beach. It may be a holiday.

Scenario 1- wrong & consequence

There are two boys playing with the ball near the sea. One of them is wearing a cap, striped shirt and shorts.The other is wearing plain shirt and shorts.They may be friends or brothers.

Personal Response

In my opinion, I don't think he should do that as if they hit someone else , that person may get injured and their parents will have to use their hard earned money for paying that person's hospital fees.Or if the ball has been thrown into the sea, they may try to go into the sea to retrieve it back.I suggest that there go somewhere where there is lesser people and not near somewhere dangerous like the sea.

Scenario 2 -wrong & consequence

There is a boy playing tag with a girl, who was sitting on a float, in the sea.They may be siblings.

Personal Response

I don't think they should play in the sea as the girl seem quite short.If she accidentally falls into the sea, she may drown in the sea if the boy is irresponsible.I suggest that they play tag on land and not in water.And to play somewhere safe and there is not much people so that they won't bump into someone else.

Scenario 3- normal

There are two girls building a magnificent sandcastle.There is another boy holding a pail of water which the water probably is from the sea.He probably want to use the water to make the sandcastle more stable and firm.

Personal Response

Looking at their facial expressions, they look like that they are having a lot of fun making that sandcastle.But it also need a lot of perseverance and hard work to built such an magnificent sand castle.I understand how joyful it is to build sandcastles as i had an experience myself before.

Scenario 4- normal

There is a lady with a pony tail playing a guitar.There is also a girl, who is clapping her hands, sitting next to her feet.They probably have a mother and daughter relationship.

Personal Response

Looking at her facial expression, she seems to be loving the song.I feel that the feeling of having a day outside with your parents is wonderful as you will feel love and happiness with them.Even if you have quarrel with them before, but you will still have the feeling.I went out with my parents before and love the feeling of it.

Conclusion

Having a day outside with your family members is wonderful.People should often come out with their family members if they can.


Monday, April 12, 2010

The learning trip at sungei buloh

When i first reached Sungei Buloh, i thought in my mind:''So, this is a forest.''We walked in and went to our groups.I was in a group called A3. We met our guides and went to a bridge.Went towards a shelter and sat there.Our guide said about rules in the Sungei Buloh.They are not to release our animals at the nature reserve as number one, they will compete space with the animals at the Sungei Buloh.Number two, they will compete food with the animals there.Number three, they prey the animals there and lastly, they will spread diseases.After that, we almost talked about the World War Two.

We started walking into the forest and saw some plants.We walked back to have a 15 minutes break.After that, we started walking to the mangrove boardwalk.We started seeing plants like Avicennia trees,Bruguiera trees.We even start seeing animals like squirrels,horseshoe crabs and even a monkey.My classmate, Jia Xing, made a face looked like that monkey, the monkey was so angry that it almost wanted to attack him.But lucky for him that the monkey decided not to attack him.

After this trip,there are three things that fascinates me.No.1. the animals there are very cute and always jumping as i never seen a squirrel before.No.2. the plants survive through the high tide and low tide of the sea.No.3.Some plants can survive in saltwater like the Sea Holly.

Sunday, April 11, 2010

yo!

If you have noticed, my playlist is gone.It is because mixpod's playlist is getting cranky. I went all the people's blogs that had mixpod and realized mine was not the only problem.So, i believe, the problem lies in mixpod not my blog, phew...Well, although this problems still lies, but i still want to put music in my blog, so that it will be more 'alive'. So, i will be sharing with you my favourite songs that are linked to youtube. The first song is happiness oxygen (幸福氧气), the next song is the loved castle (爱的城堡) and the last song is i love hey girl (我爱黑涩会)

Monday, April 5, 2010

The three day moltivational camp

On Tuesday,the first day of camp,we get to know our trainers,Candice and YY(yuan yee).It was fun,they told jokes,i laughed until my head was like going to drop off!
BUT!!!On Wednesday,Candice started scolding us.This is part of her sentence,"Why are you wasting your life?Do you know that you had almost lost your own life?All of you said that if you almost lost your life,you will live differently,
right? Then,why aren't you risking your lives?''
I was thinking about what she was saying. After that,she drew a picture of the womb inside a female organ.We are the sperms,that is why she said that.This is when i understand she was saying.
She asked us to close our eyes and imagine that we walked into the door of our house,seeing the pictures of us at the age from 1 to 12.Then see our parents inside of want of the room.Imagine that our parents became old.At that moment,i felt a tear rolling down my cheeks uncontrollably.After it,a lot of people cried.I thought that i really shouldn't waste my life.I must fight for my loved ones.
Lastly,Thursday,there is a closing ceremony,pupils went up to the stage and talked about their thoughts.I was touched,when i went back home,i said to my parents,''I'm sorry that i shouted at both of you.Could you forgive me?I love you!''